Mr President:
I am writing this letter to suggest some ideas about the televisión show your are planning to broadcast for next year. As we all know adolescence is a special and rather controversial time in our lives. All teenagers have an inner human potential that eagers to come to the light, so as president of a network you have not only the privilege, but also the responsibility to let the potential of your audience keep on developing.
A good television show for teenagers must not follow any structural format. It should be something new for them, in other words, it should be something they have never experienced before. The tittle is important and the name that I have in mind is: “What would you change?”. If you have such a tittle, the idea behind it can trigger a completely new vision of the world.
What better thing could there be for an adolescent to be asked “what would you change?” The show can begin with little flashes of interviews showing adolescents from different places of the country answering that question. We can discover a whole new world of ideas if we only ask them” what would you change?”. Obviously, this is not the only idea. Then, the show will continue with a collage of adolescent production such as music made by them, a real sport event covered by a teenager without experience on the field, real rock concerts, political speeches etc.
A whole new world commented by teenagers would share valuable information on the views they have about the world. I hope my suggestions come in handy for the show you want to broadcast.
What would you change? An interesting questions for all ages not only for teens. It would be nice to hear their answers. It would be interesting too, if you can get interviews from teens all over the word and then you can compare them with our teenagers in Argentina. A good way to compare different realities. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteHello sabrina. It is a great idea. When I thought about the letter I focused on argentinian teens but the idea of interviewing teens from the rest of the world and compare them is interesting. The result will be nice and if you listen to them you can get points of view you have never heard before. It happens to all me the time teaching at running state schools.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the style of this writing. It's really argumentative. While I was reading, it looked as if you were a specialist of teenage TV shows. Anyway, There are some little mistakes (not many) that made me think you should revise your writings more times. For example, in the first sentence you wrote, "your are planning." I'm sure that this was caused by some kind of distraction, and not by a lack of knowledge. I recommend you to devote more than one day to your writings. I know that sometimes it's hard, but you never perceive your mistakes just after committing them. That's why it's good (at least, it is for me) to write everything one day, and revise it on another day.
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